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Deep Pool
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 11:44:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I watch in fascination
as the blood on my hands
falls
and forms a pool,
i had to make a stand
and do things
i thought i'd never do.
Null and void
silently
fighting demons of doubt
fires of hell
burning me
making it hard to keep my kool,
can't trust no one
so i don't talk
even when i want to.
What is the reason
i don't understand
why i am forced
to do the things
i thought i would never do,
i had to make a stand
now the blood runs
and forms a pool.
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secretwind
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2004-05-20 23:44:29]
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Re: Deep Pool
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by emystar on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 12:08:09 AM AEST
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Heart breakingly sad.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Deep Pool
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:06:45 AM AEST
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| sad, yet beautiful. nicely written. odd how others can destroy so easily... |
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Re: Deep Pool
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:58:25 PM AEST
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| amazing write. i can relate in some areas. |
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