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MY ~ SMILE
Contributed by
AnGeL_M
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Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 12:58:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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People tell me my smile brightens up their day so I'm afraid if I dont smile all pain will go their way even when I'm sad I continue to smile my friends say just to see my smile when their sad they'd walk a thousand miles. Why is it that if I dont smile- it makes things go wrong I cant always be happy you know sometimes my days are also bad and long My smile people say is the cutest they ever seen the way my eyes glow and the puffiness of my cheeks. My smile to me is just an act to cover up I cant let people know when I'm sad its to me a must. just because I smile basically all the time doesn't mean I'm never sad and things are always fine. I know this may sound just a little mean but maybe ask whats going on in my life behind my smile what do you see? you will see a girl that has feelings too. A girl who tries to make everyone happy and has had some tough things to go through too. You say "this girl is strong" "She never is brought down" but do you know that sometimes I go to bed wearing a frown?
My smile is something I do for all you,and my friends I read somewhere just because a person smiled it stopped someone from puttin there life to an end. So maybe everyone once in a while show someone those "pearly whites" who knows that person could been down that day and wanted to end their life. I know its actually kind of weird to think of things that way but please before I end this poem read on to what I have to say just because someone smiles doesn't mean they dont hurt and cry too always remember to help that person after all they helped you!
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Re: MY ~ SMILE
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 01:06:09 AM AEST (User
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Merry smiles do not hurt us. Good write
venkat |
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Re: MY ~ SMILE
(User Rating: 1 ) by secretwind on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 01:37:27 AM AEST (User
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though it is hard to do at times,smiling can be make others feel at ease.Well written and deep,good flow. |
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Re: MY ~ SMILE
(User Rating: 1 ) by loveisendless on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 10:52:56 AM AEST (User
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A SMILE IS ALMOST LIKE A CURE,FOR YOURSELF & OTHERS! BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN & WELL EXPRESSED ANGEL!! WE ARE ALL PROUD OF YOU!!!
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Re: MY ~ SMILE
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:19:02 PM AEST (User
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wow, i often feel like others use me to fill their voids and gaps without return anything, i loved this poem great read!! |
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