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final breath
Contributed by
spooky
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Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 04:32:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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never knowing when,,
it will happen,
it's that final breath you take,,
you never know when you go to sleep,,
if it your last sleep,,
or even out with the family,
will it be your final beath,,
do you say to the ones you love,
I love you,,or,, please forgive me,
for the stupid things that I'v done,,
it's that fnal breath you take,
will be the last time to you will see them,,
just think,,you could be walking you children
to school then you receved your final breath,,
did yo say I love my children,,
or say I wil see you after school,,
did you say I love yo to your spouse or mate,,
when you left them that day,
or even family members,,
we will ever know or when it will happen,,
on a beautiful spring day with our family,
or in the dead of night,
snuggled up to your partner,,
knowing nothing could happen to you,,
it take's one final breath,,
to never say what you want,,
to anyone,,
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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Re: final breath
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by Heartfilledblood on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 04:39:35 AM AEST
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| Pretty good poem. I really enjoyed reading this. :) Makes me think of my grandma and just wishing I could have said something really important that ment a lot too me before she died. |
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Re: final breath
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 07:17:04 AM AEST
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Good write, Craig.... I think this is a nice reminder....
Jenni |
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Re: final breath
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 12:40:00 PM AEST
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great message in this poem, your right craig, life is very precarious:) hugs n' love nessa
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