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Rachel
Contributed by
apollo
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Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 01:04:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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If beauty as vivid as light
must be composed of,
I write this in the name of you.
Dear Rachel,
your sensation
has captured my heart.
However,
do not worry
time is on our side.
For I would wait
until Earth's end
to spend just one moment
alone
with you.
Copyright ©
apollo
... [
2004-05-21 13:04:19]
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Re: Rachel
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by pixie on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 01:09:48 PM AEST
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Awwww this is lovely, Rachel is one lucky lady :O)
takecare and keep up the great work.
pixie xx |
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Re: Rachel
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by loopylou on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 01:28:34 PM AEST
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| aaaw wowshort and sweet i likedthe langauge used in this! |
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Re: Rachel
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 01:55:01 PM AEST
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lovely
Shari |
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Re: Rachel
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 02:53:07 PM AEST
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| Lovely write, well expressed. |
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Re: Rachel
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by Archie on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 02:10:58 PM AEST
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| Good poem I hope things work out between you and her. |
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