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My Upgrade
Contributed by
phildel
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Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 06:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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She crept in between us,
Showing off her everything,
Showing my true nothing
To the world, stupid girl...
Her green emeralds streaked
With gray thunderous skies,
Seem to look down upon me
And whisper goodbye, to brown eyes.
And I am left to watch them
From afar I can see,
He'll get an upgrade of her
The way he upgraded me.
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phildel
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2002-10-10 06:40:00]
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Re: My Upgrade
(User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 07:03:38 AM AEST
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Sorry 'bout that. This was a great write though. I can feel the pain and the anger in it. It'll get better.
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Re: My Upgrade
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by Lia on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 07:43:17 AM AEST
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| yikes...can feel the anger coming from this one...good poem |
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