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Was I a Thought to Begin With
Contributed by
Chief
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Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
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In a fleeting moment, you gave me life
One of many, I would be
I wondered, was I a thought to begin with
Was it possible, you really wanted me
I wondered this so many times
Because in me, you left much doubt
You'd make me feel I didn't belong
Far too often, I just wanted out
Many times I seen your anger
Your frustration and discontent, clear to see
Many times I felt the pain you caused
You always took it out on me
I know that you didn't love me
I hardly ever seen you smile
No recollection that you ever cared
These memories will stay with me a while
Was I even a thought to begin with
Or merely the end result
It wasn't my choice to be here
You created me, it's not my fault
: Copyright 2000 Dale E. Price
Copyright ©
Chief
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2002-10-10 07:00:00]
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Re: Was I a Thought to Begin With
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 07:08:42 AM AEST
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I've felt like this at times... this poem conveys everything... I love the way you show all the pain... and frustration in it. Great write.
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Re: Was I a Thought to Begin With
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 07:14:53 AM AEST
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HI Dale, lovely to see you here again!! This is such a sad write, but it is so beautifully done. I hope you find the answers to your questions.and that they were positive ones...
Hugs,
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