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Unknown Feeling....
Contributed by
luckygal
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Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 10:21:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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What is this feeling I have
It is a feeling that I cannot explain
A feeling that I do not have control of..
A feeling which I do not understand
A feeling I feel.. I want it
Yet cannot have it..
A feeling I feel I need it
Yet cannot receive it
A feeling I feel I lost it
But never had it.
Is this feeling caused by you
Or could it be expressed by me
Is this feeling deceived by you
Or could it not be perceived by me
Is this feeling sure to you
Or could it be true to me
This feeling I have
I could not be sure of what it is..
I know I feel it but do not understand why.
I know I need it.. but tend to underestimate it
I know I have it.. yet, it is unknown to me
I wish I could tell you about this feeling of mine..
But, could not find a way to..
I wish I could share this feeling of mine with you
But, not sure if you feel the same way too..
I will just keep this unknown feeling of mine..
And just hope that someday you would feel it too.
Till that day this feeling of mine
Is just for you and only you!!!!
To: ..."BMW"...
Copyright ©
luckygal
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2004-05-21 22:21:18]
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Re: Unknown Feeling....
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by full_blur on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 07:58:36 AM AEST
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this poem has quite a unique style. You get across your emotions not only with the ideas, but with the structure of each stanza as well.
really cool! |
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