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Masks
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 10:27:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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from twisted portals of the past
come brning images, pain that lasts
broken promises, back stabbing lies
what I seek, lies deep in her eyes
I search for ways, to escape the hate
my brain locks up, pupils dialate
the tears pour down, my cheeks are red
I breathe no more, my heart is dead
cant place the blame for my dimise
my silent screams, my hallow eyes
I lie awake, and pray at night
to gain the strenght, to win this fight
to overcome my conflict inside
and to destroy these mask behind which I hide
Copyright ©
holderofthestone
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2004-05-21 22:27:31]
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Re: Masks
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 11:00:09 PM AEST
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This is full, rich... and heartwrenching. Another sad one, holder? Well... you keep writing and I'll keep reading - and one day, perhaps there'll be a happier one from you. Oh, I do hope so!
Well, well done! I like this one a lot! |
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Re: Masks
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 02:17:27 AM AEST
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Sad But Written So Well !!!!! I Wish The Very Best Of Luck To You Holder :-)
Keep Em Coming I'll Continue To Read & Comment On Your Poems As Well :-)
Hugs
LoVe - AnGeL |
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Re: Masks
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by MDodgen on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:15:26 AM AEST
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| i liked his poem alot. you missed a u in burning but i still love you. good job. |
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Re: Masks
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:14:53 AM AEST
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well, you know teh whole story I loved this one...a lot I can relate just liek every other one you write.....this one stands out...keep it up!!! great write
much love,
Dani
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