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A gift
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 10:29:06 PM in AEST
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The most agonizing feeling is that of being alone
of not having her in my arms
of not knowing her secure feeling of love
I knew that feeling once...
but it slipped away somehow
and what seems like a brief instant
has brought a lifetime of anguish
I know not what has become of my fallen angel
and I fear I never will
but I wish there was a way for me to simply tell her...
Ill always love her, and she can keep my heart.....
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2004-05-21 22:29:06]
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Re: A gift
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 10:48:15 PM AEST
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Oh, holder - this is so sad. I'm aching for you! Here's something now for you:
Keep you heart with you - hold it tight
Share it, open it, show it - if it feels right
But please... don't give your heart away
For love may come again one day!
Thanks for sharing! Sad... but lovely!
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Re: A gift
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 02:11:25 AM AEST
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{{{ Holder }}} This Is So Very Sad & Heartfelt Write Hope Your Ok !!!!
Hang Tuff Love Will Come Again Before Ya Know It ....
LoVe - AnGeL |
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Re: A gift
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by MDodgen on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:17:50 AM AEST
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| not my favorite but still a great job. your love is out there, waiting for you. |
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Re: A gift
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:12:35 AM AEST
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I know, I know, and well it sux...but I will get over it someday...and you will to...hopefully stick to your writing youll find a way out...I liked this one however great like the otehrs...
much love,
Dani
xoxoxo |
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