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Wretched Tears
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:10:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Wretched tears
Why have you come?
My face I cannot
Show anyone
How I wish
That it werent so
That pain today
I didnt know
Strong, I tried
So hard to be
But weakness now
Has taken me
A tear or two
Would not last
But this sobbing
Will not pass
Oh! Teardrops
Wash clear away
This ache, and
With pity play
Wet drops of
Therapy mine
I embrace you!
Now its fine
Wretched tears
I beg of thee
Please! Wont you
Stay with me?
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2004-05-22 00:10:58]
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Re: Wretched Tears
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by venkat on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 01:14:30 AM AEST
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nice write. I have read your poem "Dear poet"
that was also very nice ..beautifully written. venkat |
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Re: Wretched Tears
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 01:37:22 AM AEST
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Strong, I tried so hard to be but weakness now has taken me- the story of my life... very touching poem to me great work
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Re: Wretched Tears
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 02:34:10 AM AEST
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| We've all had these tears. Good write. |
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Re: Wretched Tears
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by Soulless on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:40:03 PM AEST
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Another masterpiece, I hope you keep on writing poems because I will never stop enjoying them.
kisses.
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Wretched Tears
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 01:13:54 AM AEST
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Straight to the point and yet again beautiful. I think this is one of my favourites though, its simply gorgeous.
Take Care
-Becca
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Re: Wretched Tears
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 02:11:18 PM AEST
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This is sad. With your exquisite talent you bring these emotions to life on single page. You have such a magic with words.
Timber thanks you for hitting that "OK" post my poem button and sharing this with us.
Thank you.
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