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Ocean's Lovers
Contributed by
Black13
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Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:13:19 AM in AEST
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In cool still waters, lovers, gently in passion weep.
Burning inside to reap another kiss just as deep.
Tongues smoothly caress and slide over their lover.
As eyes remain locked in bliss, without the will to sever.
Their bodies move in currents gentle sway.
In rhythmic flow as if linked to the tides way.
Blushing as if they touched for the first time.
Passion reigns in their veins strong enough to be a crime.
At times their lips say it's a mistake.
But this hunger is more than they can take.
His hands pull her closer to him embracing.
Her eyes draw him deeply, entrancing.
Planting kisses on her hands and back
as she presses against him, fingers in his hair.
Flowing into one another in liquid lust.
Becoming divine in the perfect trust.
Each breath coming from the other quicker.
Climax rises flushing cheeks crimson.
As climax settles and sleep nears
dreams of vivid passions remembrance lingers.
Copyright ©
Black13
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2004-05-22 00:13:19]
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Re: Ocean's Lovers
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by venkat on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 01:07:16 AM AEST
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| Aww..beautifully romantic..venkat |
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Re: Ocean's Lovers
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 01:40:10 AM AEST
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Aww Yes Beautifully Written Loved & Enjoyed It Very Much My Friend :-) Keep Em Coming :-)
LoVe - AnGeL |
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Re: Ocean's Lovers
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 01:56:14 AM AEST
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| The flow on this one had me drifting up up and away to the clouds...EXCELLENT!!! |
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Re: Ocean's Lovers
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by arden on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:28:05 AM AEST
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naughty naughty jeff.
tsk tsk tsk lol
that was...lol wow.
um "nice" yeah thats a good word to use. oh wait no, Steamy?
i was waiting for somthing bad to happen, like the guy trys to drown the chick in the water or somthing.... yea that woulda been cool :)
anyways this was nice jeffery. i hope the other one is really dark or somthin.
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Re: Ocean's Lovers
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:25:10 AM AEST
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Ooh La La!! That whistle barely caught my attention...so soft it was..:>)
But I'm glad I heard it anyway...Lovely sensual write...so glad I didn't miss it....
Jenni |
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Re: Ocean's Lovers
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 01:23:07 PM AEST
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Wow. That's sensual. Much, much more than erotic. Quite a write. Makes me think of the things I've written and said about intimacy. It transcends the physical, but doesn't leave it out, either. Nice work. I like the following line best.
Passion reigns in their veins strong enough to be a crime.
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Re: Ocean's Lovers
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 01:36:09 PM AEST
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| beautiful...lol, I love when you whistle ;) |
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