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Concrete Feet
Contributed by
carmen_queasy
on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:08:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Concrete feet, dried into the ground
The discomfort drives you mad
You make no sense, no sense at all
Am I too weak to break your fall?
Lets brand me right now, bare it on my skin
The way you love to make sure I dont fit in
Too weak for anything
Stop right there, trust me its fair
Its our way of showing you we really do care
So am I your little China Doll?
Fragile tape around my waist
So you can shape me how you want
And paint breakable on my brittle face
Concrete feet will keep her safe
She wont be able to move
Concrete feet so she cant grow
Were doing it just for you
Dizzy, dizzy, spinning round
Though my feet are fixate to the ground
Frail, little China Doll
Well destroy your little soul
Well assume the world will swallow you whole
Concrete feet can stop me no more
Though my China Doll exterior stays solid in the floor
One day Ill be strong enough to break your fall
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2004-05-22 10:08:54]
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Re: Concrete Feet
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:30:32 PM AEST
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