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Daydreaming
Contributed by
MellaSwtASHonee
on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:04:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As I daydream of you, youre touching me right
Youre kissing me passionately, touching me softly
Undressing me slowly
Kisses are placed on my face, below the waist
Hands are exploring my beautiful brown thighs, rising up
I undress you slowly, and places kisses all over you
As we make sweet love you silently say me name
Silently say me name, silently say my name
As I notice that you were shaking me, calling me
Saying my name, Im back to reality
*darn*, again, daydreaming.
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MellaSwtASHonee
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2004-05-23 00:04:51]
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Re: Daydreaming
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by TheRaven on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:30:00 AM AEST
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Very passionate, very true...I think everyone has experienced this 'dream' at least once. Here's to hoping your dream comes true...
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Re: Daydreaming
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by JBJPrincess89 on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:51:14 AM AEST
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| All I can really say is great job, I think everyone has a daydream like that at some point in time. But you put it into words quite nicely. Good going!! |
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