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my single wish
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:18:22 AM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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If I had one single wish
one dream that I could ask for,
and recieve without question
I would simple ask for one thing
I would only request
that for one moment
for one split second
you could be me....
so you could see
how much I truly love you.
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2004-05-23 01:18:22]
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Re: my single wish
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:24:27 AM AEST
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| Ahhh the sensation of love....well done. |
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Re: my single wish
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:29:08 AM AEST
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Awhhhhh.... very sweet, holder. You left me with a warm, fuzzy feeling this time! And I know what you're saying here.... sometimes, the feeling's so big that words couldn't possibly do it justice. The only way someone would "get it" - is if, literally, they were you.
Thanks so much for sharing! |
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Re: my single wish
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:12:58 AM AEST
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awwww sooo sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: my single wish
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 03:40:34 AM AEST
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if only for just a moment, huh?
excellent write.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: my single wish
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:10:11 AM AEST
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ah you got it....thats exactky what I would wish for...just so they know how much hurt they are causing us...but you know id never get that wish so who knows...they never will...
much love,
Dani
xoxoxo
great write!!! |
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