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Invisible Feelings
Contributed by
DoubleONate
on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:55:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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To everyone else he was just a normal guy,
To keep his status up he would always always lie,
But deep down inside his feelings he would hide,
Cuz no one ever cared to ask him why,
Why he felt that it would be better for him to die,
Knowing this was the only way that peace he would find,
But he had to struggle with problems that never would untwine,
Always acting as if everything was great and o so fine,
If only everyone could see but they were evidently blind,
He tried to give them all a simple sign,
But too many questions had already crossed his mind,
So he gave up hope as he finished writing this line...
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2004-05-23 04:55:54]
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Re: Invisible Feelings
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by JBJPrincess89 on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:59:59 AM AEST
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| A very easy to relate to and understand poem! Thank you so much for sharing! |
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Re: Invisible Feelings
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:19:30 AM AEST
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| im sorry your pain is made so evident...expressed beutifully... |
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