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Daddy,why does god hate me?
Contributed by
Vermillion
on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:45:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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blood drippin from my wrists
scares engraving on my fists
flashes of my skin being nailed to wood
flashing images of a skeleton in a hood
hes holding an hour glass and saying tick tock
Im only 6 years old how could time run out on my clock?
my spine is twisted in a knot
so bad I cannot stand or walk
cancer is eating alive my brain
doctors say 2 more months and Ill be insane
I feel like thorns are wrapped around my head
and nails are piercing my back as I lay in bed
what did I do to deserve this Im so young
how could something happen to an only son
my mom cannot have kids anymore
I tore apart her tummy I left blisters and sores
a falling star is on my rosey red cheek
tho its upside down Im sure itll grant my wish this week
a man in black with a white collar saw me today
he said God hated me and I should be in my grave
there are these voices in the back of my head
they say many bad words and that I need to be dead
they tell me to touch myself tho my privates are scarred
uncle Roy did that after he came home late from a bar
I heard a story about an invisible man named Christ
no matter the problem he always made it right
so I asked him for the preacher to stop hitting me with a belt
then a voice from the shadows said 'your far beyond his help'
so now I turn to my fathers wisdom and charm
he can always help me when hes not sticking needles in his arm
so when it got late and I started to bleed
I crawled over to him and asked 'daddy, why does god hate me?'
and he said
boy let me tell you, you dont fit in his plan
he doesnt have use for you, you fell from his hand
if he ever needed a cripple hed shoot the rich in the spine
you are just meant to crawl and die, speaking of which, its bedtime
now I pick you up and hook you up to the wires that kill your living cells
now I tuck you in and say goodnight now say your prayers and go to hell
Copyright ©
Vermillion
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2004-05-23 10:45:07]
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Re: Daddy,why does god hate me?
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by pixie on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 11:08:32 AM AEST
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Wow, this is so sad, so powerful, ....yet a greatly written poem
takecare,
Pixie xxx
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Re: Daddy,why does god hate me?
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 11:24:21 AM AEST
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WOW!!! that is soooo sad....it is like I was there standing over him...when all that happened...and that i wanted to help him...aw jeez...you can really capture moments on paper...which is signs for a great writer...I have a feeling you will go far...and Im honored to post comments on your work b-4 you ever become famous...you will seriously become famous you are an awesome writer...please please keep it up...and keep it coming...great write!!!
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Re: Daddy,why does god hate me?
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:50:49 PM AEST
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Awww This Is Just So Very Sad But Written With Perfection !!!!
You Are An Awesome Writer :-) Keep Em Coming !!!!
Hugs , Love & God Bless :-)
LoVe - AnGeL |
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Re: Daddy,why does god hate me?
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by brigitte7735 on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:59:32 PM AEST
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You are the equivalent of what i love about independent movies, like forcing to face the things the darker side of human nature, but in a sympathetic light. So breathtaking.
Vanessa |
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Re: Daddy,why does god hate me?
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by shorty_52 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 06:35:30 PM AEST
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omg!!! this is so creepy yet so good! u r so talented u do really good writes! no need to tell u to keep up the good work, u seem to do that without people asking u too.
~allyson~ |
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Re: Daddy,why does god hate me?
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by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:02:05 AM AEST
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You are such a powerful writer. Out of all the poems I have read of yours so far this one seems to stick the most. Its powerful. You are a truely amazing writer. And I look forward to reading more of your works.
::Elizabeth:: |
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Re: Daddy,why does god hate me?
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by deadbloodyrose on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:10:18 PM AEST
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| holy *****! thats an amazing poem.. its so powerful... i think everyone in the world should read this poem.. im left speechless.. i showed some of my friends and they coudlnt think of anything to say either except wow thats so powerful.. very very nice job.. AMI JO |
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Re: Daddy,why does god hate me?
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 06:01:43 PM AEST
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| god, those images, they are ones so similar to ones i have had... that he's six really really makes this poem perfect and brings everything about how horrible people can be. they act this way to a six year old, and they act this way to others too. it's sick that they do. you made a very good point. awesome job as always. |
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