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Kitchen Knife
Contributed by
Nickibabe421
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Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:16:54 PM in AEST
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I cut myself today,
to see if I could take away the pain.
My friends don't understand,
They all think im insane.
But the feeling that you get,
when the knife touches your skin.
Is just a feeling of relief,
Of the woman I am within
I only wish I had someone to talk to,
A person that cared about me.
Some who understands what I'm doing,
A person who can see what I see.
I only have one friend in this world,
One who understands my life.
He understands the pain and suffering,
My best friend, the kitchen knife
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2004-05-23 12:16:54]
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Re: Kitchen Knife
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by Vermillion on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:22:14 PM AEST
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| I totally see where your coming from with this poem and i can totally relate. You are a very talented poet keep up the good work |
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Re: Kitchen Knife
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:32:05 PM AEST
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i understand the need for release, the desire to free from the anxiety but not the cutting. i just can't deal with agony in any form. i get too much from just waking up and opening my eyes.
nice write, though.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Kitchen Knife
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by pixie on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:02:14 PM AEST
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Very moving, very well written, I can relate ona personal level. I hare found frienship in blades, glass, but I am now strong enough to get thru the pain without the need to cut, it took me a long time to get here 9 years , but it is something that I know you will be able to overcome when you find the strength from somehere.
Takecare and keep writing, you can get a great outlet from that, I know I do,
Pixie xx |
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Re: Kitchen Knife
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 09:25:01 PM AEST
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WOW>>>>> you don't even know how much I relate to this poem...I hate the fact I do it...but I love when I do it...I hate how much it feels good...I know that when I do it....I know that I'm hurting others...and thats when I slide the blade once more...it'sweird to think about it...but it's the truth...I get ***** off that people know...and yeah I don't know...I love this poem...its so like I dont know WOW, but yeah great write
read and comment my stuff....if you want.....!!!!!
-Dani |
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