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Broken Promise
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
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Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:51:58 PM in AEST
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I have broke a promise,
I swore I would keep
The reason that she weeps
Is cause the blood that seeps
From the wounds I create,
That put me in this state,
Of everything is ok for a while
I take the blade across my skin,
Hoping I can stop the pain within
With one cut I will begin,
And it wont end until
The hate inside I kill
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Re: Broken Promise
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by pixie on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 01:55:07 PM AEST
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Emotional, but a good write, there are alot of people who can understand what you are going through on here, me being one of them.
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Re: Broken Promise
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by Mortis-Dark on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:08:46 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this poem. I absolutely love the first stanza.
"I have broke a promise,
I swore I would keep
The reason that she weeps
Is cause the blood that seeps
From the wounds I create,
That put me in this state,
Of everything is ok for a while"
Brillaint write.
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