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Psychotic Dreams
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:24:05 PM in AEST
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the sky's drowning in blue seas
my skin is burning alive
the sun slit his wrists
and the moon watches
fascinated by his blood
the stars are jumping from their pedestals
crashing to the ground
and my blood
trickles through scars
left by you
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2004-05-23 16:24:05]
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Re: Psychotic Dreams
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by Saitou-sama on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:12:11 PM AEST
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| This is awesome! The first part is completely random and mixed up, but the last few lines reveal that it was caused by someone else. I love this idea. Great job! |
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Re: Psychotic Dreams
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by movax on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:39:40 AM AEST
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