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death
Contributed by
hot_topic
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Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 02:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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the death that comes and goes.
with one last breath and then it unfolds.
with one goodbye and final laugh.
with friends and foes, looking into ur eyes.
wondering.."did i treat her/him the way i should have?"
did i make a mistake?
but there gone.
and we are sitting here alone.
with no-one by our side.
no-one who has the same voice as you.
no-one who i can tell secrets too.
the death that comes and goes.
with one last breath and then it unfolds.
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Re: death
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by Shabby on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 05:52:35 AM AEST
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| i'm 41 and for some reason eminem's music touches me lately....and so does this poem...nice job |
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