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Concert in L-minor
Contributed by
Archie
on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 05:27:15 PM in AEST
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All is quiet as the musicain steps onto the stage.
He closes his eyes as the violin and cello players begin to play.
He picks up the baton in one hand and the microphone in the other.
The chorus begins to join in behind him on the single note which begins this song.
There is no road
only the journey.
A spot light on
a darkened world.
There is no song
only the memories
of loves gone wrong
and agony.
As life goes on
I learn its lessons.
All that is good
will come to dust.
And sorrows song
rings with much laughter
on tongues of old
and bitter men.
The words echo throughout the theatre
All the instruments playing perfectly
Every voice ringing on key
And then it is over
The conducter opens his eyes and exits the stage
alone
Copyright ©
Archie
... [
2004-05-23 17:27:15]
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Re: Concert in L-minor
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 05:32:45 PM AEST
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| A powerful notion, and its realization is captivating. Great lyrics and an awe inspiring picture |
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Re: Concert in L-minor
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 05:42:05 PM AEST
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really beautiful, archie, i love the images, and its very moving:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Concert in L-minor
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 05:53:09 PM AEST
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*Standing Ovation* to the musician..as well as the poet..
Thank you for this splendid performance...
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Re: Concert in L-minor
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 12:14:38 PM AEST
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And the crowd stands with great applause, as tears stream down their eyes. For his music has danced upon their hearts. This was awesome......Five stars all the way Archie.
Blessings
HOPE4ME2 |
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Re: Concert in L-minor
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by arden on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:37:37 PM AEST
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this was soooo beautiful.
i loved this write. it was truly amazing. wonderfully done, perfect.
5 stars.
Arden |
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Re: Concert in L-minor
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by Elena on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 05:56:22 AM AEST
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A fine and intriguing write. What is L-Minor? Love minor?
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Re: Concert in L-minor
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by wray on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:13:06 AM AEST
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| I really like this but not sure why. I think the words just ring very true for me. A nice summary of how so many people feel about life, I think. |
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