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Tear
Contributed by
Colleen
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Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:19:53 PM in AEST
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Everyday I see you fall
I know once you would have tried to crawl
crawl your way back to what is right
now everyday is dark as night
Can't you see I've always been here
the warm and cleansing tear
I try to reach for you and erase the cruel
but all I feel is the painful pull
The pull of wrong
you aren't strong
you can't face the fact
that you can change your act
I offered you my hand
into an old but better land
where you use to be pure
and not afraid to shed a tear
But you forgot me
I am forgotten and you agree
I see you slip, I see you fall
but you wont ever learn to crawl
As much as you've changed
and I know this seems strange
I want you to hear
I'm still your warm and cleansing tear
Copyright ©
Colleen
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2004-05-23 20:19:53]
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Re: Tear
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:43:15 PM AEST
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nice style and well written, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Tear
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:54:41 PM AEST
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