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Don't
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:13:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Dont call me beautiful
And for heavens sake, dont take my hand
Oh please! Be unwelcoming
For tenderness I simply cannot stand
Dont give me anything
Dont whisper secrets or play those songs
Leave me! Go a-wandering
I cant remain complacent for long
Dont offer support to me
Do not make promises, dont hold me tight
I beg you! Be disinterested
I wont let you in my dreams tonight
Dont smile when I pass by
Just pretend that Im not there and dont care
Turn away! Go disappear
Making me love you is so unfair
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Re: Don't
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:46:27 AM AEST
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awww! i see you have it under self struggling, but i find this sooo sweet! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Don't
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by pixie on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 01:00:31 PM AEST
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Brilliantly written, but sad also.............
takecare,
Pixie xx |
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Re: Don't
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 08:21:40 PM AEST
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| great poem! I often feel that way about "her" thanks for sharing |
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Re: Don't
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by MDodgen on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:59:30 AM AEST
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| wonderful poem, i know just how you feel. sometimes it easier to be alone then to be hurt again. holder better not be thinking of me when he says "her". maybe it's the imaginary her. good job anyways. keep writing these wonderful poems. |
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Re: Don't
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by Elena on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:24:45 PM AEST
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I think this is excellent, and good advice.
E |
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Re: Don't
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:25:05 AM AEST
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Great poem, it's nicely pieced together. It's not always easy to be as tough in actions as our thoughts would like us to be. But your half way there in your acknowlegements. Powerful write.
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Re: Don't
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 03:59:19 PM AEST
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Oh my, I can certainly relate to this. A very creative way of saying what probably many of us have been through.
And wow, again, you really had those creative juices flowing in May 2004.
Thanks,
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