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Tonight
Contributed by
MisterRight
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Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
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Whenever were together, feels like the beginning of forever, I know we are meant to be.
But your doubts still show, and at this time I do know, that it isnt only me.
Though the time we share, when we embrace with a stare, why that is I just cant see.
As tonight descends, youll be out with your friends, and the one I call the other.
I cant go. There, my face I cant show. So Ill stay home with my fears that smother.
When its him youre with, and alone you sit, do his eyes speak like mine, I wonder?
I will be waiting here, alone with my fear, and these painfully empty arms.
Doing what I can find, to occupy my mind, to protect this fragile heart from harm.
My mind wanders, one question it ponders, with him are thoughts of me gone?
I struggle all night, till the days dawning light, unable to push these thoughts aside.
For and end to my sorrow, if I see you tomorrow, this pain I bear, I will hide.
I need you to see, just how we will be, when the time comes and you do decide.
No more temporary reprieve, because if you believe, I will feel this pain nevermore.
If you feel Im the one, and weve finally begun, Ill show you what it was all for.
But the hurt is here now, always taunting somehow, one thought Im powerless to fight.
While Im here alone, and my anxieties grown, I think where are you sleeping tonight?
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MisterRight
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2002-10-10 20:00:00]
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Re: Tonight
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by herbleaf23 on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 08:08:09 PM AEST
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excellent, mang, i really really enjoyed it, although i didn't really like the very ending, the rest of it was so good it doesn't even matter. i really liked the rhythm of it, when you look at it on the page it doesn't look rhythmic, but when you start reading it totally grabs you and bounces you along. very very good.
i've been in a similar situation and if it is as similar as my situation was, I say get the hell out of there, now. Just stop hanging out with this girl completely. It will really suck for a couple of weeks, but eventually, out of sight, out of mind you know. ok actually it took me more like a year and a half to totally stop thinking about her, but eventually it all worked out cool, because i totally forgot about her and ended up finding exactly what I had always been wanting all along, which deep down I knew wouldn't be found with the one i was so crazy about. who's boyrfriend was my best friend...
anyways, enough of my yakkin, good job.
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Re: Tonight
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by MisterRight on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 03:48:23 AM AEST
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I appreciate your advice, but I have tried to leave this girl and I came to realize there is not one ounce of my heart or soul that desires to live without her. She is exactly what I've always wanted... and I can't walk away from that. Everything will be worth it if we're together in the end.
Thank You for your comment.
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Re: Tonight
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by SeXyDrAgOn on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 05:45:36 AM AEST
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| great poem, i enjoyed it, and i agree, it doesnt look rythmic, until you start reading it... |
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Re: Tonight
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 01:35:53 PM AEST
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Good write, Curtis..hang in there.... it may work out still...
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Re: Tonight
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by Lia on
Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 02:41:11 PM AEST
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| Curtis..please forgive me for being so blunt here..but watching you hurt causes me to hurt in a way (if that makes sense). Have you ever heard of the saying 'having your cake and eating it too"?? If you have..then enough said..if you haven't..PM me and I will explain further. I guess I just feel your suffering has gone on long enough and makes me wonder if she isn't enjoying your suffering. I see your love glow through your words..I can feel your ache..how could that not affect her as it has affected me and all I know of you is from this site...Again..keep your chin up hon...everything always works out in the end... |
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Re: Tonight
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by MisterRight on
Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 05:48:21 PM AEST
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Yes Lia, I've heard that expressioin about a million times within the past year. But I don't know what to do other than follow my heart and my heart always leads to her. Eventually, a decision must be made one way or the other for her to ever have what she desires out of life and all I can do is wait for that decision and try to show her I can provide the life she desires. But yes, the suffering has gone on long enough, but only one person can stop it.
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Re: Tonight
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by MisterRight on
Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 06:05:14 PM AEST
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Here's a continuation to my reply: You said it will all work out in the end. I've heard that just as many times as I've heard "Having your cake and eating it too." But that's what I'm hoping for. If it all works out in the end, whenever that may be, and if we end up together all the pain and suffering and heartache will be more than worth it to me. She's all I want out of this life and there's nothing I won't go through to be with her. Whether right or wrong, that's how I feel.
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Re: Tonight
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by Lia on
Sunday, 13th October 2002 @ 04:24:09 AM AEST
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| What an amazing love you have shown for her...I wish you the best of luck Curtis :) |
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Re: Tonight
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by princesspurty on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 09:01:24 AM AEST
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| beautiful, but sad, maybe you need to be done with her and start over with someone else, your too good for all that BS shes giving you! |
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Re: Tonight
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by MisterRight on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 01:46:23 PM AEST
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Thanks for your comment princess. Truthfully though, I don't want to be done with her... I want to start with her. You say I'm to good for all this BS, that may be so, but I wasn't this good until I found her. That may not make sense to you, but until she came into my life, there was no one more important than me... and she is. That's how I know she's the one. I'd have to be a fool to walk away from the one.
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Re: Tonight
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by OreO on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 10:14:44 AM AEST
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Actions speak louder
than words!?! or do they...
Beautiful write
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