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Mr. Untouchable
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:20:28 PM in AEST
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Hes popular because hes sweet
To everyone he comes to meet
Hes pretty smart and very cool
Hes cute enough to make girls drool
He likes to act. He likes to sing.
Hes up to try most anything.
Hes brave enough to take a chance.
He loves to sing and likes to dance.
Hell ask you how you really feel.
Hell even listenyeah, for real!
He likes to rap a rhythmic poem.
From clique to clique, this guy can roam.
Hes funny and hes modest too.
He hates to see somebody blue.
Hes nonchalant and real polite.
His smile and eyes are big and bright.
Hes never once meant any harm.
His presence just shows off his charm.
Hed love a good ol' game of Poker.
He is a guy you'd deem a joker.
Hes not perfectthis is true,
But hes quite close to the cue.
Yes, hes great, this we all know
But out with him well never go
Its just a rule that no one breaks
It's just a risk nobody takes.
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Re: Mr. Untouchable
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by eatfresh22 on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:32:29 PM AEST
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This was a really cute poem. It seems that there is always one of those guys at every high school. Too bad they are untouchable! Hahaha, but they are so much fun. Creative and fun. I enjoyed reading this poem.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Mr. Untouchable
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:39:07 PM AEST
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ahhh!! this is fabulous!! i love how you wrote this, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Mr. Untouchable
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by antares on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:50:07 PM AEST
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| yea i know how that goes lol! i definitely kno the one who fits this at my school! real nice and cute poem! luved it! |
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Re: Mr. Untouchable
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by livingdedgurl on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:28:17 PM AEST
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| that is so true...i love it aaliyah |
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Re: Mr. Untouchable
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by RavishingRoses14 on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 08:26:31 PM AEST
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| OMG! That was so good! You should really give it to him, you know. I know it takes guts to do something like that, but it would be worth it to him. Maybe he wouldn't be so Untouchable to you. |
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Re: Mr. Untouchable
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 05:39:03 AM AEST
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A Brilliant poem Always the best looker I know the one who all the girls fancy
You never know could be you fingers crossed
Love Angelxxxxx |
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Re: Mr. Untouchable
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:00:25 PM AEST
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| You know I would try to become his friend. You never know what would happen after that. He sounds like a real jewel. : 0 ) I liked how you wrote this and it had real good flow. Nice write. Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: Mr. Untouchable
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by Archie on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:13:01 PM AEST
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| Wow this is an awesome poem, seems like this guy's parents taught him well. |
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