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Autumn
Contributed by
Soulless
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Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:31:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Once again an empty space to fill
More thought to burn through
Place of only thought to fill of you
But time creates and heals pain
Now it seems your nothing but a stranger
Just a figment once entwined among my dreams
Gone are my lost candles
Taken and torn
Crumpled along autumn leaves
Broken and worn
Fallen farther from me
Lost and missing
Crumpled along autumn leaves
Are my obscured secrets
Lay beside me among the burning forest
Take in the subtle hints of dusk
Bring me the rain to settle the flames
Absorb ruins never the same
Gone are my lost candles
Taken and torn
Crumpled along autumn leaves
Broken and worn
Fallen farther from me
Lost and missing
Crumpled along autumn leaves
Are my obscured secrets
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Soulless
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2004-05-24 18:31:28]
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Re: Autumn
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:59:51 PM AEST
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this is absolutely sooo beautiful, and i love this line so muchly, "Just a figment once entwined among my dreams", i always read your poems several times because they have so much meaning behind them and i do not want to miss anything, excellent as always!! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Autumn
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:14:44 AM AEST
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this was beautiful I took in every syllable it was breathtaking. I loved the part about the burning forests.
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