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Pyschosphere
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 10:35:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Confusion and dismay
rule this world of disorder
secrets are kept inside
cause i am to scared
to let anyone know
how i really feel,
exsisting
in this hell
where i experience
only anger
slowly time passes by
and my wounds never heal.
Oh i bleed
teardrops fall all the time
and i feel
like i can never really smile
wanna stop
the voices that whisper to me
but i can't
cause i don't know what is real.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2004-05-24 22:35:10]
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Re: Pyschosphere
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by StAiN on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 10:57:20 PM AEST
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WOW, i can really relate to that.
i love the title. |
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Re: Pyschosphere
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:31:51 PM AEST
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I liked this it really spoke to me in a way I can't describe. Really well written and emotional.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Pyschosphere
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by Saitou-sama on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:10:41 PM AEST
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| Am I right in thinking there's a touch of paranoia in this? Not that that's a bad thing. I really love it! |
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Re: Pyschosphere
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 11:22:07 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a sad one. Written well tho.
Hang tuff darlin, you'll get thru.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy |
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