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Never Learn
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:20:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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BROKEN!!!!!
By your 'therapy'
That leads me to disaster
And ladels out unhappiness
I've cried, cried, CRIED
And fled from your hands
That lead to death
Chorus:
Still I never learn
Oh God when will I learn???
I can't comprehend my stupidity
All these times I've ran to your arms
That drip with addictive poison
And all these times I see
I'VE NEVER LEARNED!!!!!!!!
I've never learned...
And it sickens me
As I take comfort in these unholy ways
Chorus:
Still I never learn
Oh God when will I learn???
I can't comprehend my stupidity
All these times i've cried out
And gotten no further to the truth
Turned to you, TURNED TO YOU,
But your fangs bring no pleasure
And send me, SEND ME
To where I FIND MYSELF NOW!!!!
Curled in my hated existence
Chorus:
Still I never learn
Oh God when will I learn???
I can't comprehend my stupidity
But God I turn to You
Despite these thoughts that advise me otherwise
As I pray for deliverance
Where is the promise
Of a lifetime spent with you?
Where is the promise
Of a lifetime spent with you?
At peace in Your loving arms?
I'm blinded from seeing You,
But I'll hold on to You
If its the last thing I do
I'LL HOLD ON TO YOU!!!!!!!!!!
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2004-05-24 23:20:45]
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Re: Never Learn
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:40:53 PM AEST
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good work as is.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Never Learn
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by Black13 on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 12:21:26 AM AEST
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Awesome man.
You didn't send this one to me you jerk.
It was wicked.
I think every stanza is good.
If you feel it needs work though have at it.
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Re: Never Learn
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by Another_Dimension on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:37:08 AM AEST
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| this is raw emotion, layed out right infront of me on a platter. Very thought provoking x 4/5 |
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Re: Never Learn
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:40:38 PM AEST
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beautifully expressed feelings joel, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Never Learn
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by waos on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 09:36:11 PM AEST
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| I thought that was really good, and because it is so brutally honest and open I think there is nothing you should change. Good job Joel, I always like reading your stuff. I really like how you ended this one too, it's good to try and stay hopeful. Good stuff. |
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Re: Never Learn
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by Kie on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 05:54:56 AM AEST
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When you are hurt, angry, disappointed the more you write the more impact you will have on the reader and it can help you get thru those hard times as well.
You know how to put emotion into words and take the readers heart to a level where they don't know what to do---cry, feel anger etc.
Wonderful job, really a great poem.
Hey write some new ones soon! I've read all of the ones here!!!
Please? Hope so.
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