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The Doorway and The Fruit (Revised)
Contributed by
boricuacd
on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 12:22:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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An opening to the doorway,
Whose light compels me to proceed,
But where?
Confusion
Runs through my head
Like a doe
Trapped in the deepest hollows of a raging fire.
It escapes my grasp
And ruins me.
Seductress,
Whose alluring breath
Succumbs the innocent to obedience,
Are you threatened?
She plots, carefully, my demise.
Enticed by her loathsome caress,
I aimlessly follow.
The crowd mesmerizes me,
As the fruit taunts my feeble spurning.
Succulently whispering my name,
In the calming breeze
Of her temptuous breath,
She hisses,
"Come, desire rules you"
And so I do.
Led by the strings of my mind's desires
I, the "Servant", minister amiss,
Willfully.
Here I stand, torn
Between desire and compulsion,
Confusion and knowledge,
By the opening to the doorway
Whose light compels me to proceed.
But which do I choose?
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Re: The Doorway and The Fruit (Revised)
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by full_blur on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 01:47:58 AM AEST
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| cool stuff. you kept me in suspense till the end. I hope you continue the story! |
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Re: The Doorway and The Fruit (Revised)
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 01:48:14 AM AEST
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Great job.
a prime example of free will.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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