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A man without body
Contributed by
venkat
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 12:30:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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O Mother, give me power
To conquer worldly passion;
Thou art the cause of passion
How can I conquer thee?
When ever I tried to enter
The seed-less divine trance
Thou lit up the passion fire
As I tried to enter the secret
Cave in my heart I was lost
In the valley of thy breasts
You are the endless passion
Born from the mind of God
Covering the hearts of men
Like the blue sky of illusion
How do I conquer thy nature?
Thou art the consort of God
Thou art the cloud of passion
I wanted to drink moonshine
Of knowledge but thou rained
Dark ignorance into my body
Filled fascination in my eyes
Filled passion fire in my mind
Thou brought nudity of beauty
Into visions and all my dreams
Filled my brain with lusty images
Was it thy justice to turn me mad,
When I sought the love of God?
I tried to forget my sex and gender
Yet you did not stop thy jugglery
Brought youthful bodies of maidens
Into the embrace of my cosmic body
Tested my ego, and broken my vows
Was it thy law to play blue films
in the minds of thy true devotees?
Why did you laugh at me mother?
Why didnt you let me be pure one?
I desired only to remain a little drop
In the ocean of thy consciousness
If my male ego is an obstruction to
Reach thee burn down my male ego
If my body is a reason for my failure
Burn down body and reduce to ashes
O mother, let me erupt like a bubble
And disappear in thy blissful waves
Of supreme consciousness for ever!
Copyright ©
venkat
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Re: A man without body
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 01:52:02 AM AEST
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when i read your work it always reminds me i should be meditating more! excellently written as always.
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Re: A man without body
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by mountainhigh on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 03:14:10 AM AEST
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If thy eye offends thee, pluck it out.....but not my eye, but the carriage that walks within....pluck it out...
Excellent advice but I have learned to expect nothing but the best from you, you never disappoint. Thank you for another golden page my friend.
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Re: A man without body
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 05:29:35 AM AEST
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My god, again I could not check up before posting..there are two type mistakes...lusty-images was typed as lust-images and tested my ego was typed as test my ego..sooo sory friends.please bear with me
thanks for the comments..next time I will be more careful..sincerely.. venkat |
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Re: A man without body
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 06:47:44 AM AEST
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Again a very well wriiten piece...and the journey to overcome our human frailties is a hard one...but your words inspire
Shari |
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Re: A man without body
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:15:53 AM AEST
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Another excellent write, venkat! I think I am in love with your unique way of phrasing. Whatever it is, I look forward to your poetry. You have expressed the struggle within. A catch 22 if you may."Thou art the cause of passion How can I conquer thee?" hmmmm.
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Re: A man without body
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 11:12:11 AM AEST
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Ahh, the snare of passion has thee bewildered. As long as the search is continued, the light inside will over ride any snare,and your ashes will scatter amongst the lands of lotus', to purity's domain.
Your words are beauty in the fields of the soul search....ahhhhhh simple beauty!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: A man without body
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:45:14 PM AEST
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what a beautiful soul you have my dear friend, this is exquisite:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A man without body
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:57:45 AM AEST
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Your words tell of the age old Indian culture of poets, wordsmiths, religious persons of great respect. It is a pleasure indeed to read the works of one that is following in the footsteps of the venerable poets of the past. Meditation is sadly lacking in the modern world. We would all be better citizens if we followed the simple truths that were written so very long ago and passed down from generation to generation.
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by kalika_vidya on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:24:44 AM AEST
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| Oh my..my..I'm speechless..it is astonishing write about your experienes in a poem. I love its read..k |
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Re: A man without body
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 05:24:42 AM AEST
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Amazing write, my dear friend..... as only you can do it...
Jenni |
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Re: A man without body
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:57:02 AM AEST
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Passions of the flesh kind Sir. Please don't apologize for the typos we all make them and over look them for each other!
Splendid write Venkat.....willing to sacrifice everything for the love of your God!
Poetic hugs
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Re: A man without body
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:12:08 AM AEST
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WoW Venkat What An Excellet Write Here My Friend !!!! Written With Perfection :-)
Please Keep Em Coming !!!! Masterfully Written Dear Venkat Sir :-)
Yeah Don't Worry About Those Typos For I've Made Plenty Of Them Myself :-)
Love , Hugs & God Bless
LoVe - AnGeL |
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Re: A man without body
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:26:31 AM AEST
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| I truly hope you find peace and harmony with this struggle you have ... your poetry is so honest venkat and I'm sure your soul searching will bring divine bliss to you ... an incredible write ... hugs Jan |
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Re: A man without body
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by Loyalist on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 06:51:10 AM AEST
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Just a wonderful piece my friend!
Tis a great and noble struggle you speak of. |
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Re: A man without body
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:42:21 AM AEST
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| As always, reading your poetry always makes me think more, wondering about the inner workings of myself and also how you can create such magnificient poems. Well done. |
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Re: A man without body
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:19:29 AM AEST
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| Deep... you have a gift my friend. |
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Re: A man without body
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 02:42:05 PM AEST
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truely outstanding
and I happen to agree with you
PFR |
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Re: A man without body
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by df on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:28:46 AM AEST
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Hello venkat,
The theme of this piece has been explored by both men and women since, well forever I imagine. Men seem to be simultaneously blessed and cursed with strong desires and it is a wise one who looks within for balance.
This theme's antipode would be interesting too. I think a piece praising a man's nature could work as a foil here.
thank you for the write,
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Re: A man without body
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by df on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:28:58 AM AEST
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Hello venkat,
The theme of this piece has been explored by both men and women since, well forever I imagine. Men seem to be simultaneously blessed and cursed with strong desires and it is a wise one who looks within for balance.
This theme's antipode would be interesting too. I think a piece praising a man's nature could work as a foil here.
thank you for the write,
df |
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Re: A man without body
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 03:54:18 AM AEST
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Good and enchanting write!
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: A man without body
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by Archie on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 08:00:21 AM AEST
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| This is a great write. You have a lot of wisdom. Very few men can say that they do not have this temptation. I am not one of them. This is one of your best writes |
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Re: A man without body
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by fanniesson on
Friday, 16th January 2009 @ 07:14:36 PM AEST
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impossible not to love this one
every line so well though out
great write |
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