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untitled3
Contributed by
crimsondream
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 12:47:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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and if tomorrow is the thing that kills me..
then thats what i will be.
another day, forever drifting farther
pushing a poison blood to the surface
letting all be known, out in the open
that veins of green are to be destroyed.
and in the end, even our souls will be sold;
the schemes of silver and gold.
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crimsondream
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2004-05-25 00:47:15]
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Re: untitled3
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by full_blur on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 01:39:49 AM AEST
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this is really well done, especially the way you wrap it up, pretty powerful
how about: "the alchemist soul" for a title ? =) |
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Re: untitled3
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by screwup on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 08:05:33 AM AEST
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It was a very powerful piece for such a short write., I really like it...gets the point across.
Not really sure of a tittle though, just thought I would comment on a job well done. |
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