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luv metaphore
Contributed by
light
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:35:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Luv is like the sea
Ya enter it and it can sweep
Ya off ya feet
Its sometimes warm
Sometimes cold
It can be deep
Or shallow
It can absorb ya
Or set ya adrift
It has (d)ark areas
It has light areas
Full of mysteries
Plenty of breaking up
Beauty and treasures within
It can appear to go on forever
Or it can just come
To a sudden end...
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2004-05-25 04:35:37]
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Re: luv metaphore
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by Another_Dimension on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 07:03:41 AM AEST
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| well all that is very true. thanks for sharing. 5/5 x |
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Re: luv metaphore
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 05:39:58 PM AEST
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beautiful and brilliant:) hugs n' love nessa
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