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Contributed by
daniel
on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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damn the silence it's been draining much too long now
i think i heard about what i want to do i see a picture in my head and look on my bed display reality i can't attain at the moment for lack of better sense until i start to go then there will be nothing that can commence
i want to say something important but the meaningless comes out repeating self in me takes silence and i can't even begin to shout something's wrong what's the matter? would you even begin to know? suppose i try to tell you things now where then would i go?
hey! something's better what? something's stranger now, something's longer inside comes the danger what now?
silence
yet again another silence leading then to another violence inner me turns unto another tyrant can you then help another migrant? can you then change another stylant? can you then stop the silence?
damnable silence silence
choking the life out of my lungs gasping for breath taking the hint of sanity that i should have left breaking any part of me that i could know now best mistaking my existence for a parallel unto death making an eerie air inside the room i must accept faking the pot of leisure when pain i already met waking an disgruntled chunk of me i always will regret
damn the silence it's been draining much too long now
*** (10/9/02)
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daniel
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2002-10-10 22:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: pm
(User Rating: 1 ) by Phildel on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 07:11:38 AM AEST (User
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I like the war of the mind you've presented here with the dialogue (if i'm write in interpretation!!)
Very powerful too, very good write, thanks for the read!
Phildel xx |
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