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Winning
Contributed by
Irishpixie8907
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:09:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I feel so empty
So unwanted and abused
When will this pain leave me?
Well Im leaving now
From this life so hated
Youre pulling me down
And Im not going to fall
Not letting you pull me down
Im walking down an empty hall
No one there who loves me
Just me struggling alone
No one to get in between
Because its my turn
To watch you fall
Watch you burn
Im laughing now
Watching you roll around on the floor in pain
Cause now youre going down
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2004-05-25 09:09:14]
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Re: Winning
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by JT on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:46:28 AM AEST
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Lots of hurt in this write. Writing it away is better than bottling it up
Keep trapping it on the page.
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Re: Winning
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:22:06 AM AEST
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| very sad poem but wonderfully written. i hope the hurt heals |
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