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Rain on a beautiful day
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:06:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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By single shell revolve
Thru emptiness so resolve
Captured by what's beneath
Just to learn all your needs
Things aren't quite so niave
With the flowers blooming in the eve
You can find the one that sings
With the words that show you bleed
Now love is just a question mark
Don't think I'm talking of you
Cuz I'm still lost in the dark
Not to mention
I never was that smart
I swear just like my daddy said
That sun is brighter than
My Mommie's Son
Now,
Someday the sun can be
A son, here, here my one
Don't look to search
I will tell you
What you need
So if you do approach
Just ask me
Because at the begining
There was a sign
Two convicts and a deputy
Stole my sign
So beware
But don't be scared
I assure you the love in me
Is but rain on a beautiful day
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rhei76
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2004-05-25 16:06:50]
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Re: Rain on a beautiful day
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by Troubadour on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:51:33 PM AEST
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| i like this poem immensly. because this is the first poem i have seen that does not have a specific order, so to speak. |
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