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Thoughtless Thinking
Contributed by
ChristopherFriedrich
on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 11:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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"Thoughtless Thinking"
You think its corny; You think its a game
But I enjoy it, and it'll remaine the same
Not gifted with a pen, so you hate on me
Well get a life, and get away from me
Do your thing, and I'll do mine
Throw me your diss, and I'll hand you a dime
That's all your words are worth in my eyes
What? Did you want some kind of prize?
Well here's a gift from me to you
Get a brain and get a clue
You're a nothing and always have been
Just an animal, lost from its pen
Learn to read or learn to write
Before you diss and start a fight
Call my words shallow because you don't know what they mean
You're just a kid pretending to be a teen
You have no reason to talk your trash
Your words are fragile; Mine are considered cash
Now it's my turn to diss, but I think I'll pass
Because you're not worth it; You won't ever last
Copyright ©
ChristopherFriedrich
... [
2002-10-10 23:30:00]
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Re: Thoughtless Thinking
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 12:10:40 AM AEST
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Wow who are you angry at? another great read!
Were all poets just trying to succeed! |
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Re: Thoughtless Thinking
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by Lia on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 02:24:08 AM AEST
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| Very Well put!!! |
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Re: Thoughtless Thinking
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by aernby on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 04:39:06 AM AEST
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| nice job -- there is a rap feeling ti it -- is that intentional? |
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Re: Thoughtless Thinking
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by ChristopherFriedrich on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 06:26:21 AM AEST
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| Not really, I hate rap. |
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Re: Thoughtless Thinking
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by Mystery_Girl on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 08:29:25 AM AEST
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| Yeah good write here and u tell them...And i hope a certain peron reads this that loves to give smart comments around here of late....take care ....Tanya......:-) |
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Re: Thoughtless Thinking
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by sughy on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 06:01:39 AM AEST
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| You make a very valid point! So many people make fun of me because I'm on the football team and I write poetry. They say that the two dont "intertwine." But I don't listen to them, I keep doing my thing, while they keep doing there's. Very Good Poem! (You recieved a 4 from me) |
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