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Pain Of Poison
Contributed by
ChristopherFriedrich
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Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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"Pain Of Poison"
Blink your lights; Honk your horn
A look of hate; Your look of scorn
Made as the devil of red
It was your fault; Get it through your head
Ran the red; Caught the spark
Happened during the day; Not even in the dark
Now you're hurt and so am I
Surgery needed and a new glass eye
Partied hard and took a drink
Sped off; Didn't stop to think
About the consequences of your petty actions
You got the buzz; Did you get your satisfaction?
All for a sip of that poison glass of red
You wound up in the hospital pronounced dead
Was it worth the speed? Was it worth the thrill?
Was it worth making your friends have to deal?
At least now they realize that poison CAN kill
Copyright ©
ChristopherFriedrich
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2002-10-10 23:45:00]
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Re: Pain Of Poison
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 12:05:57 AM AEST
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| Great read! I also posted a poem today on Drunk Driving! I like this right to the point! |
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Re: Pain Of Poison
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by Phildel on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 07:00:08 AM AEST
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yup, this is great! VERY important message and great flow with the rhyme,
Nice
Phildel xx |
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Re: Pain Of Poison
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by Poetic_Angel on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 01:12:21 PM AEST
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| love ur poem!!!!!! it's deep and real |
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