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Poisonous Love
Contributed by
essentially9
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:13:12 PM in AEST
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Poisonous Love
Your love is as thin as mercury
Your love blinds you to everything
It is hard to see
With mercury
It's so poisonous to thee
It's so poisonous to me
The seas of mercury rise above
The seas of mercury drown my world
The rising is unstoppable
The flooding is inevitable
It's not coincidence
It's consequence
The drowning caused by love
Mercury is weakness
Your love is as thin as mercury
It's nothing but weak
Your love is more of a problem
Than the hate I'm filled with
You thought you were my future
When you were nothing
Your love blinds you to everything
Your love is as thin as mercury
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2004-05-25 21:13:12]
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Re: Poisonous Love
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:46:13 PM AEST
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| good write. |
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Re: Poisonous Love
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:00:50 AM AEST
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| This is really a good one from you..I wonder how much is persoanl and how much is just words..It has alot of feel to it..Bravo |
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Re: Poisonous Love
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 5th November 2014 @ 10:37:53 AM AEST
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Scathing. Ouch.
I even feel the sting of sarcasm in your "enjoy" comment. ;)
~Scorp |
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