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Just A Pun
Contributed by
outdoorsman
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Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:18:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The reporter came to me
and sat there so patiently
calming words flew from his mouth
answering questions to erase the doubt
so I told him it all
summed up the rise and the fall
insistant and persistant, he jotted away
cool and calm, I spoke all day
we parted with a shake and a good-bye
I walked away and felt so high
the story was printed and to my dismay,
I read a story about nothing I'd say
fooled was I by a printer of lies
so full of hate and bursting with despise
So I took my gun and found the one
who mistaked my life for just a pun
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2004-05-25 22:18:30]
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Re: Just A Pun
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cole on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 08:00:14 PM AEST
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Advice....
Stay clear of forced rhyme. |
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Re: Just A Pun
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:06:12 AM AEST
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| poetry as many see it, is based on rhymes so therefor i do not agree with the first comment, as i myself see the rhyme is essential sometimes for flow. your piece was interesting and well written. |
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