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Truth
Contributed by
Chimo
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:01:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Foresee the darkest line
Look into what is mine
Seek and you will find
The truth in my mind
This is the way life is
It brings you up and shuts you down
Just when you think it's over
It pulls you back into the ground
See the stains of time push away
Lose your mind, just one more time
This is how I breath
This is how I bleed
I see it through my own eyes
Feeling it from inside
How can I hide this dispise
Feelings for you are high
I'll love you till the day I die
Copyright ©
Chimo
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2004-05-26 00:01:40]
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Re: Truth
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by md on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:49:11 AM AEST
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| Don't be too hard on yourself. There's always light and beauty at the end of every tunnel. |
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Re: Truth
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 10:07:36 AM AEST
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| That was beautiful. You described your emotions very well, emotions that i know all too well. Just... wow. |
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Re: Truth
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by MDodgen on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:06:29 PM AEST
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| interesting poem. kinda dark, but it pulls it out in the end. |
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