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~ NAKEDNESS ~
Contributed by
AnGeL_M
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:09:14 AM in AEST
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No one really knows
my emotions when I take off my clothes
becoming consumed in my bare naked state.
I undress because of accumulated evil hate
by taking off my shoes my pants, socks, and shirt.
I take off my emotions no longer feeling as hurt.
Theres something about being naked
Something so natural and pure.A feeling of
love fills me resulting in a soothing cure.
So when you find me naked with tears
streaming my face just leave me to be and
I'll feel better when given my space
If only I could always be naked.
Copyright ©
AnGeL_M
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2004-05-26 01:09:14]
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Re: ~ NAKEDNESS ~
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:14:42 AM AEST
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I think we all feel better in a naked state. We are so vulnerable without clothes and this goes for man and woman alike. Poem good.
bernard. |
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Re: ~ NAKEDNESS ~
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:23:15 AM AEST
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| I agree with bernard..so vulnerable is the state of mind..venkat |
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Re: ~ NAKEDNESS ~
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:23:35 AM AEST
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| Good poem. Wouldnt it be great if every emotion were just a piece of clothing? Then when it gets unbareable we can just take each piece off . |
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Re: ~ NAKEDNESS ~
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:30:24 AM AEST
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this is so sad, im usually happier a la natural' too, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: ~ NAKEDNESS ~
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by Rylo on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:12:41 AM AEST
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| Angel this really is a sad poem, and I do feel for you on this. I also have to say though, that it would be such a blessing, to be able to walk around naked all the time. Only for the simple fact that there would never be any clothes to take off, before doing the nasty lol. Love always Ronald. |
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Re: ~ NAKEDNESS ~
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by JT on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:21:01 AM AEST
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touching poem. theres something so innocent and pure about being naked.
great write
-jt- |
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Re: ~ NAKEDNESS ~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:27:50 AM AEST
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I'm sure we're all supposed to be 'spiritually naked', although in winter time, I do thank whoever's responsible for inventing clothes, as it does get a bit cold in certain areas.
Nice poem.
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Re: ~ NAKEDNESS ~
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 12:40:56 AM AEST
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Dear Little Angel, your poem is so sad. I too feel better naked, perhaps it's the freedom or being completely uninhibited! But whatever it is, I'm glad it makes you feel better.....Please be well soon.
I love you
ConSue |
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Re: ~ NAKEDNESS ~
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by Hanno on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:06:36 AM AEST
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| When I grew up we were taught that if you thought of yourself 'naked'...you would go to hell. If you touched yourself you were damned....no wonder a whole generation was sooo scr~*#d. When I was still a child I found one time that the sun shone on me naked and it was a time that was so exciting...The feeling.... |
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Re: ~ NAKEDNESS ~
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by Hanno on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:10:30 AM AEST
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| God invented clothes so we can wear black jeans, black 'T' shirts and boots. |
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