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Daddy's little girl
Contributed by
carmen_queasy
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:39:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Yesterday, do you remember?
Daddys little girl
I know you fear youre losing me
And I fear Im losing you too
Im sorry that when you held out your hand
I wasnt there to take it
Im sorry that I grew up
Today you look at me
You see everything that went wrong
I walk away and look into the mirror
Deep down I know Im right
Finally, it hits me hard in the back of the head
Daddy, can I still be your little girl?
Yesterday, I scraped my knee
Im still running though, Im still running
In fear of losing everything I finally grabbed onto
Some unstable child runs hysterically down the street
Screaming, Its mine, its mine, its mine!
Tomorrow, I will wake up crying
As I lose myself in the emptiness of your stare
I can no longer tell if you really do care
Daddy, Im still your little girl
I didnt mean to hurt you so
I hate looking at myself
Because Im scared
Im so afraid Ill fall apart and wither
Under my hateful, disgraced and above all, disappointed glare
Everything I touch seems to wilt at my tips
I cry, but not because Im saddened
Label me, anything, just not forsaken
Everything Ive named, youve taken
Daddy, please let me be your little girl
I lied, although it wilts and dies
Yesterday, do you remember?
I was Daddys little girl
Tomorrow Ill make a wish to send
And then maybe Daddy will love me again.
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Re: Daddy's little girl
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:15:43 AM AEST
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Very well written. I find your rhyming in parts, refreshing and the overall context of this poem ensured that it be an engaging and personalised read.
Thankyou for sharing it with us. |
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Re: Daddy's little girl
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 09:57:08 PM AEST
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| Although my daughter is only 2 months old I will have to save this for her to read to her daddy one day! Beautiful! Christina |
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