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Despair
Contributed by
Vermillion
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:45:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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despair
i watch life go by
it flutters by my eyes
theres so much life
theres so much strife
still i watch it all go by
children with mothers
teens with their lovers
fathers with their sons
priests with their guns
still i watch it all go by
the loud clap of thunder
away they go to bunkers
a flash of light
and its early night
still i watch it all go by
i hear the chilling breeze
i hear the victim scream
i see the babies in their grave
bang bang go the guns in the alleyway
still i watch it all go by
the police sirens wail
someone new has gone to hell
the locus strip the crops dry
as frogs fall from the sky
still i watch it all go by
mothers hold their dying child
our leaders are put up on trial
the fire burns down the walls
to the new anarchy laws
still i watch it all go by
theres eternal despair
i can smell it in the air
famon,war,pleagues,and death
a splash of blood on my chest
still i watch it all go by
the horsemen draw nearer
it couldnt be clearer
how id love to play with the skulls
if i hadnt died those many years ago
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Vermillion
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Re: Despair
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 09:12:14 AM AEST
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This is a very moving poem, great work,
pixie xx |
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Re: Despair
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 09:57:15 AM AEST
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| Awsome write! I loved the message. What hope is there for this screwed up world? I guess it's in human nature to destroy ourselves... Everything has a flaw... I think humans are a flaw in creation... sorry, got lost in thought. Good poem! |
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Re: Despair
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by brigitte7735 on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:26:21 PM AEST
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hehehe you kick ass, i love the endings of your poems
Vanessa |
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Re: Despair
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 11:19:35 PM AEST
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hmm very interesting i liked the twist at the end and the priests with guns part made me laugh.
bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Despair
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 06:49:02 PM AEST
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| crazy, all these things going on, isnt it. i think a lot of people just sit by watching. |
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