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One giant step
Contributed by
DaveHugs
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:43:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I wasn't sure at all
What they were thinking
As I hobbled down the street
With my one shoe.
But ask me they did,
One after the other.
'Have you lost a shoe?
Poor love'
They needed to know
I had actually just found
the shoe.
If only I could tell them.
If only I could speak.
If only.
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DaveHugs
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2004-05-26 12:43:46]
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Re: One giant step
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:58:06 PM AEST
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| Point taken. Nicely done! |
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Re: One giant step
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 04:53:42 PM AEST
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| nice one mate |
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