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~Revenge~
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:19:54 PM in AEST
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I know it's a sin to feel such as this...
But the feeling arises for the need of revenge...
It swells from somewhere deep within...
My heart hath no use for scumbags like you...
You're the scum of the earth...
A lost cause for humanity's worth...
You have caused more pain and more souls to suffer for your sick... sick pleasures
But no more... will you dare...
To lay a scummy finger upon anyone you ever so please...
For the time has come... for you to suffer without remorse...
The time has come for you to know... the pain... the hell of an anguished soul...
The day has come for you to face...
God's ultimate judgement of the whole human race...
No one will be excluded...
No... not even me...
Some will suffer the same fate as you...
While others will be gathered to spend eternity in a more pleasant place...
As for me...?
Well... I don't know...
I would rather think... He'll let me spend my time in my Heavenly home...
Ah... but you...
He will smite you with such a murderous rage...
That you will go down upon your knees in pain...
And confess that Jesus is Lord...
Then He will set about making you see and feel...
All the pain and hell that you've put others through...
'Cause He'll hath no mercy upon you!
The darkness will be such a lonely place...
No human will you ever see... again...
No... not one face... will your eyes ever grace...
Because hell's coal fire will be branding your soul...
Feel it burning... feel it searing deep within...
To consume you whole... and then...
Feel the horror as it touches your body...
Penetrating deep into places of unwanted fancy...
Feel all the pain... you've caused... in your lifetime... to someone else...
See all he horrors... you've inflicted... in your lifetime... upon someone else...
Now... feel it all being inflicted upon you...
Feel your soul being tortured from inside out...
You're alone...
So... no one will ever hear your cries and shouts...
My only question to you would be... very tauntingly...
"What are you gonna do now... B******?"
But... also... I would add...
"How does it feel to be the victim for once...? How does it feel to have all of life's dignities lost?"
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Re: ~Revenge~
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:28:45 PM AEST
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I usually don't post comments on my own poems but... I just wanted to let u all know... How therapeutic this was for me to write... I feel much better now inside... I know that God will eventually take care of those such as describe in this poem... Thank you.
~Donna~ |
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Re: ~Revenge~
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:34:40 PM AEST
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Hey there Donna, it's good to hear that to write this and let it all put helped you, I write when I feel upset, angry or down and I find it is a great realese of built up feelings,
powerful poem, well written,
pixie xx |
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Re: ~Revenge~
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by TheNextRobertFrost on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:37:12 PM AEST
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| Thsis is a good poem but no offense, please do not post foul language on this site, even if it's censored |
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Re: ~Revenge~
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:45:09 PM AEST
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this is a great write and writing poetry and creating art is definatly a very influencial theraputical way to help yourself, without the video tape voodoo that is sold in amazing numbers.
And to TheNextRobertFrost, this site may have swearing and foul language on this site, which is of course censored, as it is the wish of the webmaster which is absolutly fine, but you shouldnt tell people to not swear in poems, sometimes its hard not too, its a compulsive act of emotion to swear (missin out soutpark and gangsta rap of course), and one swear or curse does not make a poem bad. You shouldnt tell people how to write even if its your own opinion, because most people write for themselves. And as kid poet says, it was theraputical to her, and why slate and destroy a perfectly good line which delivers such an amazing punch and impact, because of censorship. Because you dont like foul language. |
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Re: ~Revenge~
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by Luinil on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:53:13 PM AEST
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| i think your poem is incredible and a very clear expression of your emotion. very nicely done. |
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Re: ~Revenge~
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:07:18 PM AEST
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| I gave up on an "angry poem" that I was writing a while back because I couldn't seem to make it work without a curse or two thrown in. I wish I hadn't restricted myself. I only half purged because of it. Kidpoet - I'm glad you didn't! I can handle a few astericks.... and can appreciate the need to just let it rip sometimes. (Thanks for your adding your own comment too... it made me feel a little less heavy of heart *sigh* .) |
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Re: ~Revenge~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 03:54:13 PM AEST
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YOU GO GIRL! (((((((DONNA)))))))
I thought this was a great form of expression, and I know it feels good from experience to just let it out!!!!!! and censorship? I bleep my own words just to save the censors some work! :-) But sometimes it is just a needed form of expression!!!!
Great job!!!!!! ((((((donna)))))))
Smile......God loves you!!!!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: ~Revenge~
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:14:58 AM AEST
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Dear KidPoet, this poem was alarming to me, because it was truly revenge.......I'm so glad you have your poetry.......to vent and communicate with yourself! To get things off your chest.....but don't forget yourself either.....
too much of this can go along way. You might be being mean to yourself, for what you do to another......you do to you also.
Love you
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Re: ~Revenge~
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:51:38 AM AEST
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| I'm not sure writing this was the best thing now... I feel like I've takin' a lashing over the lanuage thing and now over the whole content of it... what good has it done me... nada... nothing!!!! |
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