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Oaks
Contributed by
TheNextRobertFrost
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:18:22 PM in AEST
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The oaks in the forest were very strong
With rough bark and emerald green leaves
It was starting to get cold so I rolled up my sleeves.
I was standing in front of a whole forest of oaks.
I looked at the trees leaves for awhile, noting the color matched that of my cloak.
I heard a crow cawing overhead,
But I insisted on examining the tree some more instead.
O, I know I should be home now,
Slaving away at my job, feeding the cows.
I guess my brother can do it today.
Besides I don't care if I don't get one days pay.
And again I heard a crow cawing overhead,
But I insisted on examining the tree some more instead.
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Re: Oaks
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 03:12:26 PM AEST
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This was a brilliant poem, It felt kinda fairy taleish, and surreal, at the same time creating reality, and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
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Re: Oaks
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by freespirit on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 03:48:55 AM AEST
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I love the way you write great job you have been given a gift god has given you the words an you have used the pen to share them with all
I enjoy you work from Dorothy |
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Re: Oaks
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by freespirit on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 03:52:42 AM AEST
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I love the way you write great job you have been given a gift god has given you the words an you have used the pen to share them with all
I enjoy you work from Dorothy |
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Re: Oaks
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by wray on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 04:50:31 AM AEST
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| I like this and I don't know why, I don't think it's terribly special. But the spacey, peaceful feeling I get whenever I read But I insisted on examining the tree some more instead is pretty awesome. Beautifully understated words. |
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Re: Oaks
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:32:14 PM AEST
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beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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