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My Mistake
Contributed by
merry
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Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:01:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My mistake sir when I told you that I cared
Let the words slip out so quickly
Sudden silence left me sacred
Undermining all my hopes dear
That you might be that special one
Who might save me from the humdrum
Take me on some flight of fancy
Like Greta Garbo and Fred Astaire
We d dance across the ballroom floor
My mistake to think you were
A gentleman of great distinction
Lay your coat upon the ground
To save my slippers from lifes mud
Oh no, I was terribly mistaken
If I thought you were that one
~~**~~
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-05-26 19:01:42]
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Re: My Mistake
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by thegurl on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:20:01 PM AEST
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My God, but I wish I would have thought of that. It fit's a current situation of the moment perfectly. It's almost like you wrote it for me.
Keep it coming.
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Re: My Mistake
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 07:27:15 PM AEST
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Yes, we have far too much in common. There are not knights on white chargers, but you knew that, didn't you?
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Re: My Mistake
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 08:50:24 PM AEST
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or fair maidens in distress?
Guess its all how you look at it
Lifes sadder side
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Re: My Mistake
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 05:20:40 AM AEST
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| Damn I know how this feels ... its like ice grips your heart and you wish the words would be sucked right back where they came from ... silence is the worst kind of answer ... an awesome write Merry ... as usual you have taken a moment and written it with perfection ... hugs Jan |
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Re: My Mistake
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:01:56 AM AEST
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beautifully written, this poem says it all, there arent many men who care if our feet get muddy anymore, i love how you did this one, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My Mistake
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by Biker on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 06:21:08 PM AEST
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| Hope this wasn't about me, Merry x |
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