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Hello?
Contributed by
SeXyDrAgOn
on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 10:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm crying out in pain
Can you hear me scream?
There's no one here to blame
Wake me from this dream
But dreams are serene
My life's a nightmare
All this pain I've seen
Do you even care?
I care, you aren't there
How could you leave me alone?
My life is bare
I have no peaceful home
Home is where the heart is
Where's the other half of my heart?
I can't live like this
Torn completely apart
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SeXyDrAgOn
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2002-10-11 10:15:00]
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Re: Hello?
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 12:49:14 AM AEST
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Good write. I can relate. I love the last two lines, they really stand out to me.
"I can't live like this
Torn completely apart"
Really good.
*J* |
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