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confused
Contributed by
krisseee
on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:55:45 AM in AEST
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im entitled to moan
you dont answer your phone
i hear nothing for days
im alone at my place
sit here thinking it through
sit here thinking of you
i thought i was your man
but you dont want me to understand.
one minute youre here
next minute youre gone
never get an explanation
have i done something wrong?
you tell me you love me
and that you think of me
i wanna believe
but you gotta let me in, please.
what the *****, what the ***** am i sposed to do?
what the *****, you dont even give me a ***** clue
see the pain in your eyes
slice my face with a knife
feel the love in your touch
i love you so much
feel so great when youre here
hurt when you disappear
i thought i was your man
but you dont want me to understand.
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krisseee
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2004-05-27 06:55:45]
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Re: confused
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by poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:11:09 AM AEST
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| That is not very nice making you wait around for her. If she had feelings like you have of her. she would be around you more often and would be calling. of course that is me. she may show you differently and you understand her. but you said you were confused. so tell her, liked your poem very much. like to see love from a man to a woman. sandy |
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Re: confused
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by krisseee on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:14:25 AM AEST
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| she has a lot of personal problems at the moment. not getting angry, just dont like to be pushed out. |
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Re: confused
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by Vermillion on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:55:36 AM AEST
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a very understandable poem, brother can i relate. best bet is to let her know how you feel or maybe let her read that excellent poem.
~vermillion~ |
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Re: confused
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by Brians_Sweety on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:23:44 PM AEST
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Great poem I'm sorry for your pain right now. I know how it is to be pushed out when all you wanna do is love someone. I am sure she will come back in due time especially since you love her so much, she can't resist you that long or I couldn't atleast. Good Luck!
Stephanie |
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