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Hoax
Contributed by
danimus
on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 10:37:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Let me sign off on mine
To collect my nerve
And we will dine
And fine every thief
Order me my strength, my belief
On a fake golden platter
But its unreal and brief
To ever feel any better
Point me out the truth
On this thick plastic menu
Could this break a tooth
To sing your teeth into "Fast Food?"
The world is a magic trick
The bulk of trust was broke
Surprised to be the tricked?
Aren't we all just a hoax?
What a jester of the prank
Make and devour your meals
But you are what you drank
So swallow whats real
Copyright ©
danimus
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2004-05-27 10:37:38]
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Re: Hoax
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by reilt on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 10:52:22 AM AEST
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| interesting write. i liked it |
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Re: Hoax
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:49:11 AM AEST
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I say that was an interesting write.
But i like it alot,good write. |
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Re: Hoax
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by Remy on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:31:24 PM AEST
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you are one complex thinker, i like this write!! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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